You all were right. Project Runway is the only show I watch on television! Thanks for your thoughts and advice on the Hot Pattern dress. I have finished it, and overall I am underwhelmed. In all fairness, if I had made a muslin I would have recognized the details that I am not satisfied with, and fixed them ahead of time. Also, part of my "meh" feeling may be related to the fabric. The quality is superb and it feels great on, but it may not have enough drape for this pattern. It is a poly/cotton interlock with matching ribbing with lycra. I can easily correct the fit/design issues in future versions, but I'm not convinced I want to make this again. I will have to think about it.
My measurements are between the size 8 and 10 and one of you kindly noted that the pattern runs big, so I decided to go with the size 8. A size 8 is also designed for a woman who is 67 1/2" tall. My height exactly. Here is the pattern envelope again:
Notice the collar and the elbow length sleeves in the center front illustration; the version I made. The neckline should reveal your collar bone and the sleeves should go down to your elbow. Here is my finished dress:
My collar is much narrower (it comes up to my throat) and the sleeves are about 2 inches shy of my elbow. Both are disappointing. Perhaps the collar problem occurred because I actually used a ribbing instead of self-fabric, but that is what the pattern recommends. Actually, it says "rib knit". Maybe my ribbing has too much lycra and pulls the neckline in too much. Also, if I hadn't taken the cuffs in by another 3/8" (the seam allowance is 3/8") they would have been horribly loose. Here is a close-up:

I was also disappointed by the design of the hemline cuff. It too was entirely too loose and too wide making it look sloppy, and the finished dress length was too long, although the dress length seems to be accurately depicted in the pattern illustration. I had to remove the hemline cuff two times to find satisfaction with the final result pictured above. I trimmed about 1" off the finished vertical width and trimmed the horizontal width about 10". I also shortened the skirt close to 4" before applying the cuff.
The shoulder seams are also about an inch too far back, and the curve is too sharp. If I hadn't flattened the curve out, it would have looked like I had small wings. The sleeves are too puffy for my liking, but I don't think that would have bothered me as much if they had been longer; down to my elbows.
Hot Pattern's instructions were easy to follow, but on step 6d I don't know how you can press the seamline down where the bodice and skirt connect, when the previous step tells you to press the seamline open and stitch your elastic to the open seamline. There is also a printing error on the bodice back where two sizes are labeled 8 instead of one being labeled 6. Also, on the instructions themselves, at step 7a, the lines get very small and squished together. It isn't a real problem since those instructions are basically repeated steps 4a and 4b. Since I still have my pattern pieces laying around, I may just go ahead and redraft the problematic areas and try another one right away. This dress certainly is comfortable and easy to make. I styled it as I would like to wear it if I were in cool, mainland, fall, weather. The reality is I'll probably wear it with my black gladiator sandals. It is fun to put on a pair of tights though! Happy Aloha Friday everyone!