Overall, I like the top. I do feel that the neck line is a little wide and heavy looking when it sits straight up. I think I may have taken the ruffles too far to the front edge of the shirt. If I had set them back a bit, then it would give a little v shape to the front and I might like it better. So I plan to wear it as you see it, with a little asymmetry by keeping one side folded down.
Here it is with the collar up:
The reason I chose this pattern is because I liked the tucks on the front and back. The directions give you many ideas and suggestions for finishing these, but I opted to topstitch them in my coordinating grey colored thread. Here is a close-up: